help please i need some thoughts

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I'm very new to copy - not to writing, just writing sales copy. I've loaded a page that is totally unlinked to any other parts of my site. is it possible to post the link here and get some thoughts w/out violating any rules?

if so - ProductivePLRcopy

if not i'll delete... tia
#copywriting #thoughts
  • that's fine. I looked at it. Try left justified... centered
    is hard to read except in short bursts.

    Just beaf-up the benefits of doing business with you... give
    examples to show how much easier and quicker it will be to
    get PRL writing from you.
  • ok, i'll make the adjustments
  • updated... i hope it looks better

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    I'm very new to copy - not to writing, just writing sales copy. I've loaded a page that is totally unlinked to any other parts of my site. is it possible to post the link here and get some thoughts w/out violating any rules? if so - ProductivePLRcopy