Flippa sales copy. Is mine any good?

by marc.v
2 replies
Hey folks, I've got a few sites I plan on selling on flippa and possibly here in the completed sites section. I'd love to hear some input. Here it is:

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Make AT LEAST 200 per month ON AUTOPILOT in this valuable offline niche

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Sites that look exactly like this are already making money!


This site is the perfect first step into the offline world! If you're lazy, this ugly little site will make you $200/mo. AT LEAST!

If you want to go the extra mile, however, you could turn this into an entire business...


Imagine you are a mortgage broker in the Los Angeles area, and someone sends you an e-mail stating "Hi there, I have a site that is #1 on google for the search "los angeles mortgage broker" It gets about 500 hits a month. There's an advertising spot available, so I'm e-mailing all the mortgage brokers in the area to see who is interested. Let me know!"


Do you think that mortgage broker isn't going to be super excited at the FIVE HUNDRED potential deals he can make if he advertises with you? He knows that he makes THOUSANDS of dollars on every deal. What do you think 300, 400, or 500 potential deals a month is worth to him? A lot, thats how much! And he won't want the other people in his field to take what could be his spot, so he's going to e-mail you back ASAP and shove money in your face!


Okay, cool. You're collecting a couple hundred bucks a month EACH from one, two, or three mortgage brokers. Can you stop there and be happy? Sure! Could you continue on and make EVEN MORE money with a tiny bit of work? Absolutely!


Your clients are going to think you know your craft. You have the #1 spot on google for "los angeles mortgage brokers", after all. They're already proven buyers who value advertising. You could very easily turn your existing relationship with them into an even more profitable one if you know anything about building facebook fan pages, twitter management, article marketing, video marketing, etc. Each one of these services is easy to do, and can command between $100 and $500 every month EACH. Ask any offline marketer and s/he'll tell you the same.


If you've been looking to break into offline , I promise you there is no easier, or more effective way than this. immediately establish yourself as an expert with this site.


Here's what you have to do before you monetize the site:
build backlinks.

That's it. It's an exact match domain, the on-page SEO is perfect, the site structure is perfect, and the competing sites are extremely weak in comparison. Because of the on-page SEO, each backlink you build is going to be 10x more powerful than the other sites'. I know, I did the research for you.


Monetizing a site like this is extremely easy to do, but If at any point you have any questions, you can talk to me. I'm easy to get ahold of, and I want to see you succeed.


If you think having one of these sites would be cool, imagine having ten! Check my other listings..
#copy #flippa #good #mine #sales
  • Profile picture of the author AndrewAU
    Hi Marc.
    I'm afraid that your listing would contravene the Flippa terms of service wrt your revenue claims given that you do not adequately draw a relationship between the revenue potential and the website current keyword position. You may be best establishing a track record of Google position improvements for this site using your strategy to make your pitch compelling.
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  • Profile picture of the author mcfur
    agree with AndreAU
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