HILFE!

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Ahhh yeah.....


Sorry couldnt think of a better headline

But ummm yeaaah.. anyway.

Im writing an ad which im going to place in local newspaper.

The end goal is to get a few paying small business's for my seo services.

Here is what i got so far:

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Whats do you think?
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  • Perhaps this is being English but mentally I would be saying to myself:

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    • Am i allowed to do that in here? I thought that was for the contests page only?

      p.s. im Australian, i just like the word kekeke
  • I would ditch the only available to the first 30 people part. Business owners are usually smarter than to buy into that logic. By the way are pictures allowed in your ad? If so I would use a zoomed in screen shot of one of your best SERPS
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