How do I condense copy for a solo advert ?

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Hi,

I want to do some ad swaps, but I don't have my
advert sorted out yet.

First,
I am not sure how many lines I would have available.
Does it change according to the ezine/list owner ?

Or is it fairly standard.

Second,
I have a great offer, but how do I condense it ?

I wrote an article about the offer
This is ia how my page starts:

.................................................. .........
Free Advertising Credits
(This can lead to over $500 in revenue.)

Use Our Brand New Banner Advert Platform
for absolutely zero cost.

What can you use the Banners Adverts for ?
Select a product, grab an affiliate link, make instant money !!!
or ... Use it to get visitors to your own website.
or ... Put up a CPA free offer ... make money !!!

I would like to give you $20 worth of real advertising credits
to put real adverts on our LIVE system.
.................................................. .........

Maybe I should take different info from the article ?

The full article is here:
Solo Ad Banner Ads offer


Is this too long for solo ad ?

What do you think ?



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#advert #condense #copy #solo
  • Profile picture of the author AdwordsMogul
    Hi Tim,

    Your question is kind of confusing, can you clarify exactly what you're trying to do?

    Also, you may want to look at your copy again. It seems you're targeting people who are not really experienced. If that's the case, your page may be confusing to them there are too many elements.

    In addition, if you want them to buy from you (assuming I'm right about your audience) you will need to educate them some more first. (a newsletter maybe...)

    Experience online marketers will not last 3 secs on your page. They will find it hard to believe you can offer them value, judging from your copy.
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  • Profile picture of the author Rezbi
    Go to Perry Marshall's Google AdWords Advertising & Pay Per Click Program.

    Sign up for his '5 days to success with google adwords' and you'll get a quick tutorial on how to do what you're after.

    It's a good place to start.
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