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Review My Salespage

by Michael Forey
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OK this isn't just another please write my salespage disguised as a critique my page. I think I got the salespage in near final form. Any reviews would be helpful.

OK so the site would be helpful www.ProvenEmailSecrets.com


Thanks
Michael
#review #salespage
  • Profile picture of the author Stephen Dean
    What's the site? Directpayaffiliates.com?
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  • Profile picture of the author RBum78
    Which link is your sig, is the sales page? 1st one or the second one?
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    • Profile picture of the author Kyle Tully
      Originally Posted by AnarchyAds View Post

      I'm done with pop-ups.
      I leave when I hit one.
      Yup, pop-up blocked the headline just as I was half way through. Gone.
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  • Profile picture of the author Topgunb
    Pop is Tacky,

    Discourages the sale. Had to leave. To frustrating.

    Suggest a signup below the fold, or popup trigger on mouseover halfway down page.

    Sorry
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  • Profile picture of the author Sumit Menon
    Like the guys said, Pop-Up a no-no. It's such a big turn off!

    And doesn't "Notice the high open percentages" sound too rude?

    And The Bullets:

    The critical part every message must have. (Without this part you're leaving money on the table)

    How to determine the best type of opt-in autoresponder. (A Single opt-in could mean less profit. Find out what it does for your business)

    The Secret to keeping your readers eyes glued to the message from beginning to end. (Hint: This little trick involves the format) [Huh? what does the hint mean?]
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  • Profile picture of the author Michael Forey
    Thanks for the input.

    I have incorporated all your suggestions.

    The pop up is gone!

    Thanks
    Michael
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  • Profile picture of the author Alex Malave
    Copy and proof looks good.

    I would tweak the design a bit. Test sending traffic with the top banner and without it. I think it distracts too much from your headline.
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