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Please review Landing page and get 5 PLR articles

by gcjmarkets
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I just uploaded a landing page and I would like to have some fresh eyes look at it. Just post your thoughts and I will send you 5 PLR articles in the Interent Marketing niche.

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Thanks in advance
Gary
#articles #landing #page #plr #review
  • Profile picture of the author Topgunb
    Hi Gary,

    I like the page, it looks good.

    The Heading Video PLR Mastery - did nothing for me, it does not tell me what is in it for me.

    Some of your subheadings would make a great headline!

    The bullet list Insert a space between the bullets and the text

    Insert a space after the bracket 2)
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  • Profile picture of the author Stephen Dean
    Even though you had free in the headline, I didn't see it. I think that's because it's a fairly weak headline.

    Have you tried putting the opt-in form (surrounded by info that let's you know it's free to sign up) above the fold as well as at the bottom? I'd do that.

    As for your writing in general. I'd try tightening it up a bit. Shorter sentences, shorter paragraphs, eliminate redundancy. Provide some proof for your claims and so forth.

    Cheers,
    Stephen Dean
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  • Profile picture of the author runr01
    Hi:

    You've certainly picked a hot new topic - Video PLR. Excellent!

    Your page reads quite well, but the copy in the header does not entice me to join...even if it's free!

    The $ sign logo is great, but a bit overwhelming, and does not say anything, it just implies. Use words in the header to support the $ sign.

    In the header why not use one short enticing idea from the "What If..." paragraph?

    Also, you want people to join for free, so put the sign up box to the top, too. You can have it several times on the page you don't have to just have it once. After all, you are trying to get them to opt in.

    Much success.
    Donna
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    • Profile picture of the author SiteKist
      OK, the dollar sign at the top is a bit overwhelming and the earlier sentences IMO should be shorter and more concise, but otherwise the page is not too long and looks fine to me.

      Maybe you should make it a bit more obvious that PLRs are Private Label Rights, some folks may not know and leave earlier than you want them to because they don't really know what you're talking about at the beginning.
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  • Profile picture of the author gcjmarkets
    Thank You all very much for your input I will be making the changes today. I am sending the PLR articles to those of you who have replied now so check your PM's
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  • Profile picture of the author Anthony Robinson
    Here are a few things I noticed:

    P.S.S What are you still doing reading this you have nothing to lose and the worse that could happen is you don't like the product and unsubscribe from my list, so hurry up while you still can get this incredible offer for free

    Seems a bit run-on; also worse should be worst.

    P.S.S. What are you doing still reading this? You have nothing to lose - you can always opt out of my list if you're not 100% satisfied. Grab this now for free before I come to my senses!

    Just food for thought.

    Also:

    The secrets to turning PLR content

    should be:

    The secrets of turning PLR content

    Hope this helps!
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