Warriors I need a quick look-see please

You'll also want to hit the core hot buttons.

WHY do people want to lose weight? How is your plan different?

And you're not part of the "weight loss community" (that sounds very institutional). You're a success story ... or a researcher dedicated to finding safe, effective and easy weight loss secrets ...

You get the picture.

Put some oomph into the headline using this too. Like ...

"Tired of impossible to follow fad diets that don't shed a pound? Discover (for FREE) the amazing secret that helped me drop XX pounds in XX days without changing my lifestyle even one bit!"

Shane

One thing that you will want to strive to do is keep your copy as tight and readable as possible. Do a thorough spell check or else people might think this is just being thrown up on the web without any thought behind it.

This includes correct capitalization, but remember, it's still copywriting so don't try and stick to old grammarian rules.

Secondly in regards to your question. Like Bambil said, your formatting and structuring need to be addressed before you can begin to think about the number of posts and the quality of them.

You should set this up as a landing page, encouraging them to find out how YOU became a success, why YOUR system works, and why THEY should download it.

With that being said, if you can sell them on the idea that your e-book is what they need in one blog post as opposed to three, then one would be ideal. Quality over quantity in regards to getting people to opt in.

Once they have done so, then of course the more quality information they have, the more valuable it will be for them.

Hope that helps


Adam

It's better than before.

I would expand your headline to include your story, with specific numbers. Like "How I Lost 15 Pounds in Two Weeks While Eating Just as Much as Before And How You Can Do the Same," or something like that. Make it your personal story, while also emphasizing that you're nothing special, and the reader can do it too.

You probably didn't lose exactly 15 pounds, but something near to that. A more specific number would be more believable than a round number like 15, so try to determine your actual weight loss to the nearest, I don't know, say 1/4 pound and use that number instead.

In any case, you need a lot more than 81 visitors to get any kind of statistically valid idea of what's happening. Plus, do you know where those visitors came from? If they're just random traffic, then they may be close to useless. Are you doing anything specific to drive traffic to your site?

I agree with some of the Warriors above that you need to tighten the copy.
Short and punchy as if you are chatting to someone at the coffee shop.
Here is the nutshell advise of the John Carlton, the Sharp Shark of Copywriting on how any page should contain:

-Here's what i got

-Here's what it will do for you

-Here's what you need to do next

Simple :-)

Stick to this and you will say WOW. okay.