We are launching our new SiteKist Website Management System software specifically for internet marketers at the moment - the German page is doing very well and we're getting downloads, but the English site (targeting mainly the American audience) doesn't seem to be getting that much response. Is there anything wrong with my text on the English startpage ??? Does it grab YOU ? I have deliberately kept it short.
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We are launching our new SiteKist Website Management System software specifically for internet marketers at the moment - the German page is doing very well and we're getting downloads, but the English site (targeting mainly the American audience) doesn't seem to be getting that much response.
Is there anything wrong with my text on the English startpage ??? Does it grab YOU ? I have deliberately kept it short.
It is pretty much a translation of the German landing page text, but I wrote the English text first because I feel more at home in English still, although German is my mother tongue.
Won't you PLEASE have a quick look and tell me why you would NOT be interested in a free download like this?
I really need your help here - I don't get it!
Is there anything wrong with my text on the English startpage ??? Does it grab YOU ? I have deliberately kept it short.
It is pretty much a translation of the German landing page text, but I wrote the English text first because I feel more at home in English still, although German is my mother tongue.
Won't you PLEASE have a quick look and tell me why you would NOT be interested in a free download like this?
I really need your help here - I don't get it!
- Audrey Harvey
- Loren Woirhaye
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