Our Launch of Free Website Management Software for Internet Marketers

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We are launching our new SiteKist Website Management System software specifically for internet marketers at the moment - the German page is doing very well and we're getting downloads, but the English site (targeting mainly the American audience) doesn't seem to be getting that much response.

Is there anything wrong with my text on the English startpage ??? Does it grab YOU ? I have deliberately kept it short.

It is pretty much a translation of the German landing page text, but I wrote the English text first because I feel more at home in English still, although German is my mother tongue.

Won't you PLEASE have a quick look and tell me why you would NOT be interested in a free download like this?

I really need your help here - I don't get it!
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  • Profile picture of the author Audrey Harvey
    G'day Sitekist

    I had a look. It looks like it's a software which will allow you to create a website that you can then upload? Is it uploaded to your hosting or to our own?

    The text doesn't really enthuse me, it really does read like an English translation of German text, which doesn't flow. Perhaps have it rewritten by a native English speaker and that may inspire more enthusiasm. It took me two or three reads to get a full handle on what you're offering and possibly busy people wouldn't take the time.

    Maybe also really push what makes your software better than the other website creation software out there eg pagebreeze, nvu... not bagging the opposition but promoting your own benefits.. market your best features. I see them as possibly being newbie friendly, you can use any copyright free template on the web, and lots of easy to use plugins.

    For myself, I probably wouldn't download the software because I'm pretty technically useless when it comes to building websites, but I've got to the point that I can do all I need to do using Wordpress, and having to learn another piece of software, no matter how easy, well, I don't see a need to do that right now. Perhaps other people are the same.

    Hope this is of some help to you.

    Audrey
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  • Profile picture of the author Loren Woirhaye
    Visitors won't like "free of charge, for now," because
    this implies they will spend valuable time learning it and
    then you will try to squeeze them for money.

    This is not an attractive website nor is it an attractive
    offer. There is too much navigation stuff there, adsense
    and so forth, detracting from any coherent selling message.

    In any case you need to position and differentiate your
    product from others on the market. You have a lot of
    reading to do in order to learn how to do that. You can
    hire a copywriter/marketing consultant to help you.

    You have a lot of work ahead of you to compete in the
    marketplace with this kind of offer.
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    • Profile picture of the author SiteKist
      Thanks guys, this is valuable input - I really appreciate this.

      I'll be reworking my pages today in order to improve on them. "I'll be back!"
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