A few days ago I received wonderful advice on my landing page
(marriage green card kit ..com) from Warriors on this forum.

The consensus solution was the addition of a
squeeze page coupled with a more
personal and compelling narrative.

Very helpful info.

I plan to implement the many useful suggestions
one by one starting with the squeeze page.

I'm very interested in your thoughts on this first draft.

marriagegreencardkit. com /freechecklist/index. php

Note: The opt-code is not activated yet.

Also, this is interesting...In response to some of the
Warriors who suggested I'd hire a pro copywriter
for the landing page...I did hire a professional
copywriter to write the copy (and paid a premium). Initially I was quite happy with the copy, but your critique and the dearth of sales are leading me to feel otherwise...

Thanks in advance everyone.