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Skyrocket - Revealing video course

by snovakor
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I'm just starting this my site before 2 months and I must ask you what do you think about it .

Site name is : Copy Writing Review

Down there you have link to another site.

I'm asking from Reason because I have CDs there for free, and I didn't send any CD out for first 2 month.

I know that I must be patience, but I think that is here something wrong. I have rang on my keywords, but not on classic copy writing . Traffic is not so big.

Now, I want to know where can I do something else, that I can push it "higher". And what do you think about this page. I need your opinion !

Thanks guys.
Alex
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  • Profile picture of the author travlinguy
    Actually, it looks pretty hokey. But that's not an insult. It's going to look that way to just about any experienced writer. But that's not your market.

    The people looking for an easy fix in the copywriting game are probably going to love it. The claims it makes are silly to me. But they won't be for people looking for easy answers. I think you'll probably do very well with it if you target it properly. You say traffic isn't good. Make it good and you'll start selling. Be sure to put it in front of people new to Internet Marketing.

    I notice it's a physical product with $10 shipping. Hopefully you can actually ship it for about $2. That would be cool. Looks like the free course comes with the option of getting a newsletter at $29 or whatever. Nice.

    Another thing I'd suggest if you haven't already set it up. Get yourself a slick One Time Offer (OTO) and have it come up when they click to get the stuff.

    Good luck and thanks. This thing of yours has given me an idea for something I’m getting ready to do.
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  • Profile picture of the author Shadowflux
    Snovakor

    I had a look at your page and I have a few suggestions.

    I think that part of the reason you haven't shipped out any DVDs is because you're shipping them out. There are two problems with this: 1) People are reluctant to give out even their email address so they are going to be extremely reluctant to give out their name and mailing address. 2) People want instant gratification, if you can make it so that they can download the free video then you will probably see an increase in conversions.

    Your sales pages is also missing one important thing: Testimonials Testimonials make people feel like they're missing out on something good that other people are already doing. This creates a sense of urgency. Testimonials also increase the believability of your claim and prove that you have sold, or given out, plenty of copies before.

    I think that making these two changes can help a lot.
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