Our First Sales Page---

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Hey everyone,

Dave and I are ready to launch our first two official product with real sales pages. "Smile"

Would you like to take a look?

AVA --- ClickBank

AVA-- Tool Kit

All suggestion welcome.

Thanks

Tina
#page #sales
  • Profile picture of the author AOCenteno
    I think your top image should be smaller.....I didn't read anything on my laptop until I looked at the bottom half of my screen. You only have my attention for 2 seconds before I click away, so get the message in front of me!

    Good Luck!
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    • Profile picture of the author lindajess
      Originally Posted by AOCenteno View Post

      I think your top image should be smaller.....I didn't read anything on my laptop until I looked at the bottom half of my screen. You only have my attention for 2 seconds before I click away, so get the message in front of me!

      Good Luck!
      I totally agree...you have to get the message out in front within the first paragraph. Make it exciting and fun! You'll do great!
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  • Profile picture of the author marcanthony
    Consider a more high impact buy button
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