The first page is to get prospects into my funnel with (what I hope) is an irresistible offer. The second link is an upsell/downsell with hopefully another irresistible offer.
Finally, what isn't seen here is another upsell to 6 months of a membership site for like $9.97.
I'd really appreciate you're opinions. I'm not much of a copywriter so y'all's wisdom could really help me out.
Here's the links (payment function isn't live yet). Thanks so much.
Page 1 - http://selfemploymentfreedom.com/gen...ut-a-computer/
Page 2 - http://internetbusinesstraining.net/offline-goldmine-2/
Thanks again folks, rip it up.