I am getting ready to launch my first WSO here soon for a new software product i made, and just had a friend of mine make a sales pitch video based on the content and screencasts i provided him.
Since this is the first time i've done a video like this, i'm not quite sure how well my message is getting across...and i know i'm not the best at creating copy with all the fluffed up and jazzy words...and i'm not an expert at video communication either....
So i wanted to see if anyone could have a quick watch of my video (2 mins long) and let me know if you have any comments or suggestions or ideas on how i can make this the best video possible. Here is a link:
Places Scout Intro Video Link
Basically want to know:
- Is my message clear?
- Can i get points across better (or more powerfully) with different terminology and phrases?
- Do you understand the what the software does and how you can benefit from it after watching the video?
- Does the video make you want to learn more about my software product (aka does it have a 'catch' factor)?
Any help would be greatly greatly appreciated....I've watched it like 100 times so to me at this point its like a broken record, and its hard for me to gauge the video's effectiveness because i already know everything about my product...i really need an outsider's opinion to help me improve the video.