Critique Request - WordPress Design Site

The grey color isn't good at all (old style design)

And the menu have a very bad position .

Try to change that .

look at themeforest dot com maybe you will find a good theme for your WP site .

Kettlewell, I am familiar with the terms you're using to try and separate your service... but if you look at it from a potential clients point of view, it would seem like complete gibberish if they're unfamiliar with "internet" terms...

And even if they were reasonably familiar with IM terminology, your service would still seem overpriced... and I would also think, "what makes this any different from a $40 theme?".

You need to differentiate yourself. What makes you different from any other web designer out there? Why should people trust you?

The copy is also hard to read with grey text.

... it may seem harsh, but your copy needs quite a bit of work if you want to sell a $500 WordPress service.

I'd highly recommend studying a few copywriting books and taking another crack at it - right now as it is, isn't going to do you favors if you start paying for traffic.

Just my 2c, no hard feelings

Ansar

There is too much listing of features and not enough promotion of the benefits of the package. Put more emphasis on how the features can benefit your customer.
For example instead of using "24 hour turnaround", suggest the benefit of it, like the fact that it's a great time saver or there's "no more waiting around!"

Overall I think your wording needs to be much more persuasive. Instead of customers simply 'wanting' your product, make them 'need' it.

Hope this helps!