Last week, I started an article writing business and posted a classified ad here on the Warrior Forum: http://www.warriorforum.com/warriors...ces-go-up.html
My First Copywriting Attempt!
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Last week, I started an article writing business and posted a classified ad here on the Warrior Forum:
http://www.warriorforum.com/warriors...ces-go-up.html
I haven't studied copywriting yet, but intend to when I can find the time. I have other big plans to take of first, starting with writing all of the orders I received from this ad.
I would like to receive honest critiques on the copy. You can be brutal, it's ok. Being "picky" with details won't help me. But examples of principles I violate will.
I'm not so much interested in the layout or graphics as the words themselves. Part of the reason is that I plan to bump this thread in a couple more weeks. Another reason is to learn.
A couple other questions:
1. Am I losing viewers in this instance by having such a long sales letter?
2. If so, what parts just I chop out and how?
Thank You!
John
http://www.warriorforum.com/warriors...ces-go-up.html
I haven't studied copywriting yet, but intend to when I can find the time. I have other big plans to take of first, starting with writing all of the orders I received from this ad.
I would like to receive honest critiques on the copy. You can be brutal, it's ok. Being "picky" with details won't help me. But examples of principles I violate will.
I'm not so much interested in the layout or graphics as the words themselves. Part of the reason is that I plan to bump this thread in a couple more weeks. Another reason is to learn.
A couple other questions:
1. Am I losing viewers in this instance by having such a long sales letter?
2. If so, what parts just I chop out and how?
Thank You!
John
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