Does this make sense?

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For a healthy nutrition product, made of very natural ingredients I would like to have this tagline on the package:

"a mother earth purely delivery"

does this phrase make complete sense to a common English?
#copywriting #make #sense #tagline or slogan
  • Nope lol... stick to something a bit more simple
    this makes more sense: 'An amazing delivery from mother nature'
    source: i'm from england
  • "a mother earth purely delivery"

    Sounds like English is not your first language.
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    • yeap its not. thats why i am asking you
  • "a mother earth purely delivery" is not looking that good as you are not native English speaker that bound to happen. You need to generate phrase that strikes to anyone mind very quickly, all the best.
  • It does not make any sense. Maybe something like:

    Mother Earth. Purely Delivered. (still, doesn't really make much sense though)...
  • Thank you all for your replies. Finally, I tend to prefer mother nature than mother earth, so I will work upon it. Thanx again!
  • Nutrition As Pure and Wholesome As Mother Nature

    Nutrition Delivered by Mother Nature - Pure and Natural
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    • "Provided Purely by Mother Nature"... would work.
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