I've been hanging around the copywriting threads a LOT recently, and I've really learnt a load of great stuff.
I've noticed that a bunch of people have been asking for critiques of their sales letters.
So... I thought I'd throw one of my own open for you to tear apart, or raise to the heavens in prayer. Whatever, really?!
I wrote this about 2 years ago, and it was the first sales letter that I've ever written. I'd love your professional feedback. It sells my quit smoking system, under one of my alternative names.
Robert Temple's Simple Quitting System
Don't be polite either.. just be honest. Rip it to pieces if necessary!
Look forward to your feedback,