How To Write A Sales Letter...Part I

by max5ty
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Ok, it's a slow day...everyone is celebrating Labor Day, or off doing other things.

I thought I'd give a quick course on writing a sales letter.

1. Headline

Forget all the BS you've read about writing headlines...stuff like they need a benefit, etc.

Make your headline something that gets my attention, and has something to do with the subject.

"Betty Gives Birth To Alien Twins", is not something you want to start out with when you're talking about weight loss.

Make it interesting...

2. Tell me a story -- We're all interested in hearing about something different.

Tell me something that holds my interest...like a good movie script.

What happened?

You did what?

It changed you how?

Have a plot...have a hero, or heroin, add some excitement, give a climax to the story...

Put me on the edge of my seat.

Make me feel pain, excitement, joy, sadness...make me feel something.

Give me an escape from my sorrow...

Tell me something that will change my life, help me feel better, get more friends, etc.

Finally, your story has led me to the point where I really want to buy what you're selling so I can change my life -- maybe to get healthy, wealthy, lose weight, gain weight, be likeable, etc.

3. Close me

If your story did it's job, I'm ready and willing to hit the buy button...I'm wanting some of what you talked about...

No need to go into all the details of why you're making this one time offer -- I could care less...I want it now.

Use your imagination.

4. Take what the gurus tell you...then plot your own course

Some may have a hard time realizing this...but what used to work doesn't still work.

We're living in an age of Androids, Blackberrys, Iphones, etc.

Faster cars, faster planes...

you get the point.

Study the past.

Learn what you can from it...but create new ideas.

Just some quick thoughts...

I've always been one to break most of the rules of copywriting, and had success at it -- don't think everything you've read about is gospel.
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  • Profile picture of the author Alex Cohen
    If you're a new copywriter, take the above post with a grain of salt.

    People haven't changed. We're still motivated to act by the same emotions and the same mind states we were 100 years ago.

    What has changed is the times. Technology, societal norms, amount of disposable income, etc.

    Bottom line: Understand the difference between persuasion elements and selling tactics before you plunge into the Break The Rules Pool.

    Alex
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    • Profile picture of the author max5ty
      Originally Posted by Alex Cohen View Post

      If you're a new copywriter, take the above post with a grain of salt.

      People haven't changed. We're still motivated to act by the same emotions and the same mind states we were 100 years ago.

      What has changed is the times. Technology, societal norms, amount of disposable income, etc.

      Bottom line: Understand the difference between persuasion elements and selling tactics before taking a plunge into the Break The Rules Pool.

      Alex
      Thanks Alex, I always enjoy your comments -- you're also a great copywriter.

      Remember Gary Halbert when he was broke?

      He decided to forget all the rules he'd been told about copywriting, and started all over?

      I'm not saying that all the old rules aren't helpful -- I'm simply saying there's something better out there -- it's yet to be discovered.

      I'm sure there's some copywriters on this forum who will forge new ideas and concepts.
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  • Profile picture of the author CopyMonster
    Thanks max5ty - for me this seems to reaffirm the 'oldie but a goodie' formula... AIDA.
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    Scary good...
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    • Profile picture of the author Mark Andrews
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      Good timing Max. Synchronicity. Amazing. Albeit my 'instructions' are a lot longer than yours.

      As a few here are aware, I'm in partnership with another top copywriter here and for our blog, I'm writing out a few new posts tonight and this is near identical to the blog post I'm right now putting together.

      I just literally switched tabs to take another 5 minute breather and lo and behold! Top of the Copywriting Forum... a near identical piece of writing!

      Great minds think alike.

      I'm thinking perhaps soon, we'll have to bring you into our fold? Have you along for a few guest guest posts or perhaps an interview or anything else which you feel you might like to write about.

      You game? Let me know please.

      Cheers!


      Pete Walker

      Originally Posted by max5ty View Post

      Have a plot...have a hero, or heroin, add some...
      PS Whack an 'e' on the end of 'heroin'.
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      • Profile picture of the author max5ty
        Originally Posted by Pete Walker View Post

        Good timing Max. Synchronicity. Amazing. Albeit my 'instructions' are a lot longer than yours.

        As a few here are aware, I'm in partnership with another top copywriter here and for our blog, I'm writing out a few new posts tonight and this is near identical to the blog post I'm right now putting together.

        I just literally switched tabs to take another 5 minute breather and lo and behold! Top of the Copywriting Forum... a near identical piece of writing!

        Great minds think alike.

        I'm thinking perhaps soon, we'll have to bring you into our fold? Have you along for a few guest guest posts or perhaps an interview or anything else which you feel you might like to write about.

        You game? Let me know please.

        Cheers!


        Pete Walker



        PS Whack an 'e' on the end of 'heroin'.
        It'd be an honor to work with you Pete...just pm me.
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