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Sales page

by m30jake
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Comment please guys and on general site design

Jake


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#page #sales
  • Profile picture of the author jade69
    The Buy Now button is too low, you should place it above the 50% line.

    And you should link only the images not the whole text.
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    • Profile picture of the author m30jake
      Hi, thanks the replies. This is just a dummy I did on Photoshop and then put it on there to see how it'd look before coding it all. After where do you suggest the buy button is placed?

      Just thought id mention that with the old page (click on the course tab) the site makes more or less 275USD a month

      I'm hoping it makes more soon with the new course page and am planning at offering two prices, one at 60 euros and the other at 30 euros.

      Jake
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  • Profile picture of the author NovaAffiliate
    I clicked on your buy now link, and it the page was in Español unless i went to the top and changed the country.
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    • Profile picture of the author m30jake
      Originally Posted by NovaAffiliate View Post

      I clicked on your buy now link, and it the page was in Español unless i went to the top and changed the country.
      Just a demo, no one can see the page yet, was a minor thing
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  • Profile picture of the author m30jake
    any tips guys'?? or is it perfecto?
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  • Profile picture of the author Toniy
    As site layout goes, I've seen many, many worse

    It's not cluttered, the colour scheme is fine, nice use of images...

    I'd be tempted to put an additional BUY NOW button just under the iPad image though... as I think Jade mentioned.

    Just reminds the folks they ARE there to buy... otherwise they might get distracted. You want to keep them in that buying mindset.

    Even though it's a short page... why take the risk?

    Overall good work though!
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  • Profile picture of the author abubakar89
    Well, Color is good, design is good, but the buy now button should be a bit upper. It should be that up, that the visitor should not need to scroll down to click it.
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    • Profile picture of the author m30jake
      Originally Posted by abumadni View Post

      Well, Color is good, design is good, but the buy now button should be a bit upper. It should be that up, that the visitor should not need to scroll down to click it.
      The buy button is also on the menu
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  • Profile picture of the author Raydal
    Addition of the credit card logos along with the buy button
    would also give you a sales bump.

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    • Profile picture of the author m30jake
      Originally Posted by Raydal View Post

      Addition of the credit card logos along with the buy button
      would also give you a sales bump.

      -Ray Edwards
      Amazing idea!! Thanks!!
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  • Profile picture of the author m30jake
    By the way guys, just had a sale of 80 euros, thats 160 euros today!! (220 USD). I can't wait to see what this new sales page does!
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    • Profile picture of the author abubakar89
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      • Profile picture of the author Toniy
        Very nicely done Jake

        Hey remember to link to your site in your signature there buddy... there might be plenty of folk around these parts that could do with an English course.

        .... that didn't mean to read as bitchy as it sounds :p
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  • Profile picture of the author m30jake
    All changes made guys and all programmed and live!!!!!!!!

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    • Profile picture of the author Ross Bowring
      "The leader of English teaching presents a dynamic and interactive online course for the grammar part of the official Cambridge exam: The First Certificate in English. Learn in a progressive and expertly methodological way to pass the FCE with flying colours! Welcome to the leading First Certificate online course."

      I might lead with the simpler and more conversational "interactive" copy you have below the copy above.

      I think you can do better than "progressive and expertly methodological."

      "The leader of English teaching" isn't specific or USP-ish enough.

      --- Ross
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