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This Shocks And Awes The Buyer Brain

by ewenmack
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Money, love, health are the secret desires of this old, yet decision maker when it comes to buying.

Put results first so it snaps it awake...

like...

"3 days later had 25% more sales. No cost to implement"

"Weekly income went to daily income. No cost to implement"


"86% of my clients are in a committed relationship within 1 year.
I have to turn down wedding invitations because I can't keep up"


"90% of the party goers are up on the dance floor within 1 hour
and stay up there for 4 hours"

Everything from selling esoteric healing thru to hard nosed corporate sales,
people who use old brain buyer language change their business

fast...one did in 24 hours.

To keep the "lizard" brains attention, you've got to use this next step.

It and the next and next are all recorded for you here...

You're So Brilliant - Why Don't They Buy??

Enjoy, like the other listeners did!

Best,
Ewen
#awes #brain #buyer #shocks
  • Profile picture of the author Don Schenk
    Did you write the copy for that site?

    Does the "course" teach people to state a results oriented USP as their elevator speech?

    I just burned their audio to a CD so I can listen while in the car later today.

    Thanks

    :-Don
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  • Profile picture of the author The Copy Nazi
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    "You're so Brilliant"??? Nope. Maybe "You're so boring". That page did nothing for me. The headline is a dead duck and it went downhill rapidly from there. Oh yeah - I tried 3 times to play and/or download the audio and...nothing. But really - that's way off the pace.
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    • Profile picture of the author Cam Connor
      Originally Posted by The Copy Nazi View Post

      "You're so Brilliant"??? Nope. Maybe "You're so boring". That page did nothing for me. The headline is a dead duck and it went downhill rapidly from there. Oh yeah - I tried 3 times to play and/or download the audio and...nothing. But really - that's way off the pace.
      I think you just like to think that no one knows how to do copywriting but you.
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      • Profile picture of the author The Copy Nazi
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        Originally Posted by Cam Connor View Post

        I think you just like to think that no one knows how to do copywriting but you.
        You think Newbie?

        Ah hang on...weren't you the guy begging me to join your little WSO on Copywriting?

        If you really want to challenge me - instead of mouthing off - put some money up and I'll re-write that completely boring crock of a salespage. That might shut you up.
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  • Profile picture of the author Don Schenk
    Mal, the audio worked fine for me! Really, all she is talking about is how to explain a USP by talking about results during an elevator speech.

    Her audio is directed towards consultants who need to create a better answer to the, "What do you do?" question.

    It should be an obvious approach, but not everyone gets it, and she does present the concept in an interesting manner.

    :-Don
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    • Profile picture of the author The Copy Nazi
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      Originally Posted by Don Schenk View Post

      Mal, the audio worked fine for me! Really, all she is talking about is how to explain a USP by talking about results during an elevator speech.

      Her audio is directed towards consultants who need to create a better answer to the, "What do you do?" question.

      It should be an obvious approach, but not everyone gets it, and she does present the concept in an interesting manner.

      :-Don
      I could care less. The page doesn't work.
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      • Profile picture of the author Steve The Copywriter
        I'm a great Ann Convery fan - her stuff is brilliant.

        It certainly helped boost up the response on lots of my copy.

        And by "speaking" her techniques it helped bring in quality new clients.

        But (and I do hope Ewen didn't write it - my guess is he didn't) the web page is not exactly outstanding.

        Don't let it put you off - listen to the audio.

        And you'll hear just how good she is.

        Steve
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        • Profile picture of the author ewenmack
          You are right Steve, I didn't write the page.

          Best,
          Ewen

          Originally Posted by Steve Copywriter View Post

          I'm a great Ann Convery fan - her stuff is brilliant.

          It certainly helped boost up the response on lots of my copy.

          But (and I do hope Ewen didn't write it - my guess is he didn't) the web page is not exactly outstanding.

          Don't let it put you off - listen to the audio.

          And you'll hear just how good she is.

          Steve
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