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copy is below, any suggestions on how to improve it? Thank you in advance.

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A "FEW" MORE TESTIMONIALS...

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Hi,

Just wanted to thank you for my articles and tell you that they were really GREAT!
I will look and see what other articles i may want and get back to you for more articles...hopfully before this WSO ends!




Thanks//

Fredrik



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  • Profile picture of the author blakesmommy21
    I think it looks great! It's laid out very well and I like how it's broken up. I also like the fact that there are multiple packs to choose from. Good luck!
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  • Profile picture of the author Sarah Johnson
    I would suggest adding some urgency to it...don't let the reader procrastinate (one of the biggest killers of sales!).

    Also, there might be too many choices of packs...it might get overwhelming for the reader.

    I would change the headline a bit too. Add some spice to it. Make it exciting. Something that really makes the audience want to continue reading. Maybe add something about the benefits that you would get from the product.

    Hope it helps.

    ~Sarah Johnson
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  • Profile picture of the author GingerColeen
    I purchased 2 packs but only received one. Have tried to reach you. Please reply. I apparently do not have enough posts to PM you.
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