Stuck on copy ideas? Put on some music. Seriously!

by MTVida
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First off, I'll state that I'm no copywriting expert. But as I'm digging deeper and deeper into it, I'm noticing a surprising amount of overlap with another style of writing that I have plenty of experience in: Songwriting.

I know that sounds odd. On the surface, sales copy and lyric seem to have as much in common as reality TV and... well... reality. But in fact, I find that the two have more in common than either do with article writing or even blog writing.

Just start thinking about the underlying purpose of the two. In sales copy, we want to evoke and emotional response, and turn that response into an action (buying).

In song lyric, the goal is also to evoke and emotional response. Instead of a buying action, the songwriter want the song to resonate with more and more people. When we hear music that hits a chord with us, we share it with others, in the case that they might feel the same connection with it. The action is different, but the path to achieving it is the same.

When you listen to popular music, pay attention to what each line is doing. It'll often be one of two things: Describing some mental sensory image, or evoking an emotion. The sensory details are what hold our attention and put us in the situation, and the emotional details are what we ultimately connect with and gets us to respond.

There are even some common structures found in popular songs that feel right at home in copywriting.

The first verse will often tell of a situation, describing the scene in detail. It could either be describing a problem, or hopes not yet fulfilled.

The prechorus starts to lift us up, letting us know that things could be different.

In the chorus, we hear what different would feel like. This is the place where we want to be.

The bridge of the song is the call to action, where the challenges are faced and change is pursued.

But don't take my word for it! Go jump onto YouTube, pick a song and pay attention to the journey that the lyrics take you on.

Everyone knows that songs quite often make for good inspiration, but now you know WHY! You can use this to consciously pull together your own ideas. The next time you feel like your outta gas, put on a song that connects with you. Study the lyrics as you listen, and figure out what is is that driving that emotional response.

Once you have that figured out, go back to your own work and get it written while the idea is fresh!
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  • Profile picture of the author Jan Hurst
    Hey, "Montana," "Colorado" here. What a great post! I would never have thought of this connection, since songwriting is not in my blood, but I know now I will never listen to another song in quite the same way. Thanks so much for this teaching moment!
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  • Profile picture of the author Everton1
    I started out writing songs, and that just may be a big help to me, thanks!
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  • Profile picture of the author MTVida
    I may as well give a great resource for those interested. This is what I used to learn this method of songwriting, in conjunction with a college course taught by the author.

    Popular Songwriting Techniques: 10 Steps to Effective Storytelling by Andrea Stolpe
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  • Profile picture of the author ShoTzZ
    Just started writing a few songs here and there, your post is very interesting and helpful.

    Thanks,
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  • Profile picture of the author George Curtis
    When I am stuck on copy, I usually just do something else or go take a nap. Then it comes to me.

    Also... for some reason I think of good copy when I am in the shower. Strange.
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    • Profile picture of the author Andrew Gould
      Originally Posted by George Curtis View Post

      Also... for some reason I think of good copy when I am in the shower. Strange.
      It's a couple of things.

      First, showering is done on almost auto-pilot, freeing your brain up to focus on the copy.

      Second, the sound of the water acts as white noise which helps you relax and it blocks out other noise.
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  • Profile picture of the author Pusateri
    The Eagle's Desperado reads just like a sales letter. Headline...agitate the pain...benefits...call to cation...it's all there. Even a limited time offer.
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  • Profile picture of the author SoonerPhoenix
    Music is a great tool in writing. There have been many deadlines that were met thanks to kicking the music player on in the back ground.
    Headphones are nice to overcome environmental problems but I prefer to be in a room alone with the music playing out loud. I even built my laptop with a excellent sound system.
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    • Profile picture of the author MTVida
      I like getting ideas started by listening to song lyrics and seeing what ideas I can take. When I have a solid idea, and I'm actually writing putting ideas down, I prefer instrumental music, or music sung in a language I don't understand.

      I tend to focus a lot on the lyrics, so I can end up getting distracted if I'm listening to lyrics when I'm writing. Just having music playing, on the other hand, is great for helping me to keep focused.
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  • Profile picture of the author ExquisiteMedia
    I listen to music quite a bit when I'm writing. As a matter of fact, about to kick off this writing grind starting off with Glycerine by Bush.

    I was also talking to a fellow writer the other night about how music can give you that drive you need to get through when you can't seem to find it.
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    • Profile picture of the author Penny Lane
      Listening to music while doing loads of work is a good idea. One of my English teachers actually suggested that. She said that listening to music, while doing something, can make you more productive.

      I suggest you guys to listen to Jack Johnson while doing something specially while writing.
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  • Profile picture of the author apolwar
    That's an unconventional way to write. Using a song as motivation or inspiration. But it could work.

    To Lady Gaga's song:

    You're on the right track baby,
    You are buying a great product.

    - Ok, that suck. I need more practice with this. lol
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    • Profile picture of the author MTVida
      Here's an example that illustrates the idea pretty well.

      I chose Bon Jovi's because commercial music is where you most often find this formula, and what's being 'sold' by in the lyrical copy is fairly relevent (the idea of a better life...)

      Now let's look at the lyrics and the lyrical tools.

      here we're setting the scene, bringing the listener in with imagery

      Once upon a time not so long ago
      Tommy used to work on the docks
      union's been on strike

      now we start pushing emotional buttons...

      He's down on his luck - It's tough
      so tough.

      then we introduce another situation: more real world evidence to support the main theme

      Gina works the diner all day
      working for her man
      She brings home her pay for love
      for love.

      now we introduce the 'hope'

      She says: We've got to hold on to what we've got
      'Cause it doesn't make a difference if we make it or not.
      We've got each other and that's a lot for love -

      and...... call to action!

      We'll give it a shot

      now we tell the listener it doesn't have to be this way. We can change it if we take action!

      We're half way there
      Livin' on a prayer
      Take my hand and we'll make it I swear
      Livin' on a prayer

      now we go back and contrast with the current situation - more switching between mental images and emotions

      Tommy got his six string in hock. any musician knows how sad this is
      Now he's holding in what he used to make it talk -
      So tough
      it's tough.
      Gina dreams of running away
      when she cries in the night

      these lines make it a bit more personal

      Tommy whispers: Baby
      it's okay
      someday.

      we repeat the pre-chorus and chorus...

      We've got to hold on to what we've got . . .
      We're half way there - Livin' on a prayer
      . . .

      ...and arrive at the bridge, the biggest call to action - you could even see this as an OTO

      We've got to hold on ready or not
      You live for the fight when it's all that you've got.

      and then the final chorus, where we even use the music to lift the emotional level

      We're half way there - Livin' on a prayer...

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      It obviously won't be like this for every song, but this formula is surprisingly common in commercial music. Do your own listening and see what you notice.
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