Please View and Critique My First Sales Page
I have been online for a long time but I have never really got going on a full long sales page.
To be honest, I have nowhere near the experience that you guys have - so if one or two of you could take a quick look at the proposed page and tell me anything glaringly 'wrong' or any tips that might increase its ROI, I would be hugely grateful.
Thanks so much.
Here is the proposed sales page for you to critique:
sales page
(Obviously it will be moved from there when being used out there in the world (ie Freelancer.com etc perhaps a (reduced price) WSO if things go well ...)
Thanks again,
All the best,
Sam
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