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ebook and sales page

by RoxanneKing
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Hi

i just wrote my first ebook called, "A Natural Cold and Flu Remedy for the Whole family,"

My nich is Mothers of young children who want to use natural products and alternative therapies. I have been building a list using my blog (link in sig).

My sales page is www.holisticcoldremedy.com what do you think about this page? Do you think its too mysterious about what the remedy is? Am I describing the benefits well?

I started my affiliate program with digiresults, do you think its a good idea to use clickbank in addition?

Thanks,
Roxanne
#ebook #page #sales
  • Profile picture of the author ARSuarez
    Roxanne,

    Study this: Bottom Line's Integrated Health Solutions

    Look at Bottomline Health (www.bottomlinesecrets.com)

    In short, I think it needs editing. A lot.

    Strengthen it by studying what companies like Bottomline do to promote a "secret" remedy type package. If you got to their pages, they have shorter sales copy for health remedy books - I would study the bullets and work on more build up.

    Sorry, that's all I have time for. Hopefully it helps.

    -Angel

    PS. Look up swipes from "Arthur Johnson." He's written a lot for Bottomline in this field. The one I posted was written by Jim Rutz.
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    • Profile picture of the author Steve The Copywriter
      Angel,

      Just out of interest - the Jim Rutz promo you posted... which is a cracker.

      And full of great humor.

      Anyway...

      Is it the piece which had one of the best headlines ever-

      "Read This or Die"


      Steve


      (Roxanne apologies for barging in on your thread)
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      • Profile picture of the author ARSuarez
        Originally Posted by Steve Copywriter View Post

        Angel,

        Just out of interest - the Jim Rutz promo you posted... which is a cracker.

        And full of great humor.

        Anyway...

        Is it the piece which had one of the best headlines ever-

        "Read This or Die"


        Steve


        (Roxanne apologies for barging in on your thread)
        Hey Steve,

        Nope, that piece was for Alternative. And it was a magalog.

        I had the promo - let me see if I can dig it up, as well as the test version, "For Every Illness, There is A Country Where It Doesn't Exist" or something to that effect.
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  • Profile picture of the author Andrew Gould
    Here's "Read This Or Die"

    http://www.directresponsemarketingfo...im_rutz_ad.pdf (not my link and it's a 23Mb file...)

    And here's "For Every Illness, There Is A Country Where It Doesn't Exist"

    http://www.directresponsemarketingfo...ry_illness.pdf (not my link and a 10Mb file)

    [Apologies for further thread disruption, Roxanne]
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