"I helped show the world how wonderful capitalism is."
Problem I have is, it's not dramatic enough (wonderful is too wimpy a word).
Also, ends in "is." Grammatically, that's a no-no (even though I know grammar can be thrown to the wind in copywriting).
What this is about: I'm arranging a humorous, yet real/serious real-time, online, ongoing demonstration of how PURE capitalism works (aka profits + "greed"). People can participate online + get a nifty t-shirt as a reward. Kinda like getting a t-shirt for doing a 5k fun-fun running race for a cause.
I want the words on the t-shirt to reflect the entire project in a simple way they can remember it by. But the sentence I came up with seems too wimpy to me.