What in your opinion makes a good copy chop?

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As the title asks...

What in your opinion makes a good copy chop and...

...can you provide any excellent examples of superb
copy chops you've come across either on or offline?

And last but not least...

...of these examples provided, what lends you to
believe this copy chop works so well when aligned
with this product?


Mark Andrews
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  • Can you provide a sample of a "copy chop"? Is this another term for swipe?
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      A copy chop example Sam...

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    • I don't think you can use "chop" in this context - just "chops" (short for "choppers", I think... aka teeth).

      I think it comes from the phrase "cutting your teeth on"... once you've cut your teeth, you've honed your chops.

      At least that's what I was told back in my muso days.

      To answer the question... "chops" means "skills"... usually flashy and/or technical in nature.

      In music, that equates to being really quickly or being able to play super-high or something (especially if you're a trumpet player, where the higher frequency you get, the bigger musical wang you obviously have).

      With copy... I dunno. Writing really "flashy" sentences? Coming up with killer hooks? Not really sure.

      -Daniel
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  • Here is an example of using your chops in an ad to make the product look better than it is
  • If I say (hypothetically) that Hans Klein has "copy chops"... I'm saying he has a talent for writing sales copy.

    If I say Hans Klein has a good "chop" singular, I'm either watching him perform in a brick-bashing Karate contest or admiring his pork dinner.

    --- Ross
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    • I saw Hans fly-kick a grizzly bear once.

      Since then I've made it a point not to piss that dude off.

      -Daniel
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  • Oh well...

    One last post for the day...

    Copy chops is not what's important...

    What's important is how much cash you're making.

    I don't care about how cute or what a whiz you are with words.

    Heck, you might even be the next big thing to hit the Warrior Forum -- maybe even the next big idol with the WSO of the day :rolleyes:

    It's all about the money.

    How much have you made?

    Living in a mansion yet?

    Driving a luxury car yet?

    Still looking for work after years in the business?

    Forget having "copy chops" -- just start making some bank.

    Good copywriters could care less about the praise they get from another copywriter thinking their work is great...show me the money.

    If you get mad at this post...you're probably still in denial about how much a good copywriter/marketer can make

    I read posts on here from people who've been in the business for years...and they're still struggling.

    There are a lot of you on here that could easily make a million dollars in 2012 by creating your own product...but you're hung up on trying to get a client...or jealous over what someone else is doing.

    I probably get more posts deleted on here than anyone...but nobody can deny my record for making money.

    If you need help, let me know...I'll help you if I can

    Hopefully, you'll get with it...
  • Amazing chops. Really got his/her chops down... etc.

    Writers, musicians, public speakers and others... These are people who've developed their talents and easily handle applying them to a given task or assignment.

    In his book, On Writing, Stephen King talks about having your chops down before going after paid gigs. It means you're proficient, maybe even highly skilled (depending on the context) at the task at hand.

    I've never heard the term in the singular. But hey, I don't get out much.
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      Maybe it's me then who misinterpreted your words Mike. If so, my apologies Daniel.

      My interpretation when I first came across the expression... copy chops, was improving those emotional triggers which get the reader to do exactly what you want them to do. Basically, powerful and emotionally engaging trigger sentences which completely engage with the readers mind.

      Many thanks fella's for providing clarification. I stand corrected.

      As regards Max5ty's comments, sorry but I'm going to call you out. Not that you care anyway since this is all just one big mind game / joke to you.

      You mention yet again about all this supposed success you've enjoyed and you state that it's all about the money we can earn for ourselves.

      Again, I say poppycock.

      Your level of money doesn't interest me. Your goal in life is not my goal in life.

      I place a lot more emphasis on personal happiness inside my heart than I do on just making money just for the sake of it. It's got nothing to do with making huge amounts of money for myself that counts, what does count is how much money I can make for my clients.

      You Max5ty, you state that if anyone wishes to be 'trained' by you, they have only to contact you and you'll be more than willing to help them out.

      The strange thing is despite you repeating over and over again the mansion, the Bentley and everything else ad infinitum there is still no solid proof that you have any of these things.

      You use a made up name here on the WF...

      You use an avatar picture which doesn't show your face.

      You haven't got a website where we can check out your work.

      We don't know the name of your company (because you've never shared this information) where you supposedly employ 200 people.

      You've deleted on your personal profile page any means by which other Warriors can contact you including the ability to send a private message.

      There is no email address and to boot...

      ...you recently sent another copywriter here such an upsetting message that you actually got her into tears. Then afterwards you sent another one just over a week later praising her up to the hilt.

      Basically sunshine, you're just bloody strange.

      You don't write sales copy in the traditional sense as most of us understand the subject and there have been no examples to date of any of the work you've supposedly done which has contributed to making you your fortune.

      All we do 'know' is your father was apparently a very famous magician and illusionist with a massive amount of wealth. Big deal.

      Either put some real proof up like you said you was going to recently in terms of a product, which in your own words, was going to show everyone else how much better you were than all the 'clowns' on this forum or just stick a sock in it.

      Nobody here cares about your material possessions which are obviously such a massive big deal to you.

      You're essentially a faker, constantly positioning yourself as this super successful guy but to date there's not been a single shred of evidence to back up any one of your claims.

      And what is weird is why you're even posting here when this is an online Internet marketing copywriting forum. Yet apparently, according to you, you don't even work in the same industry. :rolleyes:

      It beats me what you're doing here because quite honestly, you've got nothing whatsoever to back up anything you say. It's not like you have any desire even to write sales copy as the rest of us know it.

      Plain damn weird all things considered.


      Mark Andrews
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  • Mark Andrews...who wrote this post...isn't a bad copywriter...he's still learning.

    I think in time he'll do OK.

    He's an interesting "Chap" regardless of his abilities
  • @Reflection Marketing...I'm 51 and didn't know that I had a porn addiction.

    I've been in the business for almost 30 years...

    Hmmm...
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    • I'm referring to your extremely immature way of interacting with people here.

      I think you just want attention... and the negative variety will do.

      Bygones. (Since you're 51, I thought an Alley McBeal reference was in order.)
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    Its a funny thing. I've met, worked and played with a lot of wealthy people. And never, ever have I heard them describe themselves as "filthy rich". Never. That's more a description I would expect from a working stiff.

    Oh...and this...is straight out of Wankerville - And again...I would never hear that from my wealthy aquaintances - even the low-class ones.

    Pathetic really. Truly pathetic.

    Reflection's comment was probably pretty close to the mark (pun intended) -
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      Cool signature link Joe!

      Many thanks.

      At least I've got my Dinky toy collection... a Rolls Royce, an AC Cobra, an Aeriel Atom, a Bowler Wildcat not to mention the Raytheon Hawker 500 jet.

      No email from Max5ty yet. Maybe I should have put a stronger call to action?

      "Oi! Bint. Email me right now!"

  • Being rich doesn't mean one has class, respect, character, dignity, awareness, tact, compassion, intelligence or leadership qualities.

    "Mark smiles, turns his head and walks away - looking downward in disappointed at how Max5ty just doesn't get it. He realizes though that some people exist on the planet just to make him look awesome!"
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  • >>It's not about how much money you have, It's about how much you've sold.

    What's the difference?
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    • I have a bit of background in music, so let me weigh in on this expression that no one seems to have adequately defined or traced back, yet.

      "Chops" is an expression always used in the plural. It originally comes from a description of brutish dogs or other animals, meaning jaw or mouth. (As in "licking his chops.")

      This expression was taken up in the world of music, where with certain instruments, most notably trumpet and other brass instruments, the musicians must train themselves to have something called (in French) an embouchure, which means opening, and which is the precise shape and muscle tone of how the lips and mouth are held against the mouthpiece of the instrument. It's the embouchure that often separates a virtuoso from an amateur.

      Therefore, when someone NOT in music talks about someone having or not having "chops," what they mean is skill, and the kind of skill that necessarily develops over time and becomes part of the person's body and soul.

      Mostly "chops" in the musical context refers to or comes from jazz musicians.

      When Mark talked about a "chop," he was using the expression incorrectly. It reminds me of my roommate at Cornell who was from Hungary by way of Canada. She spoke pretty good English, but had some crucial holes in her knowledge of the language. One day she came back from a Sunday brunch and told me proudly she had eaten a "lock." I didn't know what she meant until she described it and I realized she had had bagels and lox. She thought "lock" was the singular of "lox." I cracked up!

      Like lox, "chops" doesn't have a singular.

      Marcia Yudkin
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