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Please Critique My Landing Page

by jon99
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Phew my website is finally completed now. Took so many programming hours.

However, I can only feel "complete" by showing the copy to you guys for critique.

It is a simple website/landing page that i will be using for google adwords.

Nothing fanciful. Comments from many of my friends are: it is a simple, neat website that got the main functions (and something that I can only afford at this stage, after spending thousands on marketing).

The link is here: im fish (dot) sg

Just be direct with your comments (I won't be offended) :L)
#critique #landing #page
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    • Profile picture of the author jon99
      Originally Posted by mazate View Post

      dude... your page is awesome! that simple... its professional i just noted 1 error the image of the top where you ask fro registration... something like page review or something like that... dont duplicate images is not cool! and dont leave empty spaces! just that...
      i really like your site!
      Thank you so much mate!
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        • Profile picture of the author Matt B
          I agree Jon. Very well done.

          Nice, clean layout & design. I like the fact that the opt-in has an option for a video or website demo. Your slider is great, I really like the images that you used.

          We are now ranking top in Google for the terms "Marketing Singapore" and "Internet Marketing Singapore" ! (Search for us in Google) <--Brings instant credibility to your SEO services.

          If I had to come up with a critique, I would suggest maybe making your logo a little larger. But that's being very nit-picky.

          Nice Job!
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          • Profile picture of the author jon99
            Originally Posted by Matt B View Post

            I agree Jon. Very well done.

            Nice, clean layout & design. I like the fact that the opt-in has an option for a video or website demo. Your slider is great, I really like the images that you used.

            We are now ranking top in Google for the terms "Marketing Singapore" and "Internet Marketing Singapore" ! (Search for us in Google) <--Brings instant credibility to your SEO services.

            If I had to come up with a critique, I would suggest maybe making your logo a little larger. But that's being very nit-picky.

            Nice Job!

            Hey Matt, yet to catch each other online for our referral JV. Thank you mate for your generous comments!! Talk to you soon!
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