WSO copy review
Hi,
I was just wondering what all of you professional copy writers thought of the "copy" that I wrote for my WSO. I have a great service and feel I did a good job explaining what it is but just want to know what I could do to make it better? I was thinking about hiring someone to write copy for it and or having a movie made. One thing that I know I am missing are testimonials so I need to somehow get around that until I have more.
Also wondering what a good Title would be...
The thread is HERE
I appreciate any and all help!
Thanks
I was just wondering what all of you professional copy writers thought of the "copy" that I wrote for my WSO. I have a great service and feel I did a good job explaining what it is but just want to know what I could do to make it better? I was thinking about hiring someone to write copy for it and or having a movie made. One thing that I know I am missing are testimonials so I need to somehow get around that until I have more.
Also wondering what a good Title would be...
The thread is HERE
I appreciate any and all help!
Thanks