Critique headline and ad copy for Wordpress plugin salesletter

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  • Profile picture of the author Nikolas
    I think it's great. Maybe you could work a little on the css and add some color (it looks a little cold to me) but I think it has everything you need to make conversions.

    Good luck
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  • Profile picture of the author Nikolas
    Oh and one more thing. The page misses a <title>
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  • Profile picture of the author David Franklin
    I like it. Good headline (You may want to consider losing the exclamation point), great proof elements, fantastic guarantee.
    had a problem with this line:
    "but you just can't add your Amazon affiliate id."
    Maybe try, "It's fully functional, the only thing you can't do is add your Amazon affiliate id. Try it right now and see for yourself how great it works!"
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  • Profile picture of the author JuniorNB
    Hi George,
    Perhaps it would help if you can insert some graphics such as red fat arrow as well as highlight the 10-times money back guarantee (that is a strong call to action you've here).
    Make buyers jump straight to your offer.

    Hope this helps.

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  • Profile picture of the author George Katsoudas
    Thanks for the great feedback.

    Fixed demo verbiage and mentioned the guarantee above the fold!
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