Hi guys, I'm new around here and new to internet marketing in general. I've created my first product and was hoping that you guys could take a look at it and let me know your thoughts. EDIT: I'm just looking for comments on my sales page, not the product itself. I wouldn't ask you to buy it just to give me criticism
battlefield3battlebook dot com
For reference, here are two competitors that are converting well:
bf3dominator dot com
relikguide dot com
(Sorry, my post count is too low to post links).