Help me choose a title..

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Hi

I am running a WSO promoting an article spin and submit service to 14 blog networks. And I am trying to come up with the right title for it:
  1. Article Marketing like never before. [INSANE OFFER]
  2. AMAZING - 5000+ Quality Backlinks for $7.47 [NO xRumer, NO BS] - QUALITY Backlinks [Crazy Offer]
  3. 20,000+ Superior Backlinks for $27
  4. [INSANE OFFER] 20K Quality Contextual backlinks to boost your rankings [No BS xRumer, Scrapebox links]
  5. The NO WORK WSO to get you more visitors to your website [100% BS FREE!]
All of the above titles are an accurate depiction of what I am offering. So what do you think?
#copywriting #choose #title
  • I personally and drawn to #3 and #5 only because they give attractive information in a really concise way.
    Frith,
    kayla
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  • I believe I like number five the best; it is the one I would click on if I saw it in the WSO. Like Kay said, it is concise and to the point. It also is interesting enough to click on to find out more.
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  • Do you think that title would still be just as appealing if the price was $27 and not $7.47?

    AMAZING - 20000+ Quality Backlinks for $27 [NO xRumer, NO BS] - QUALITY Backlinks [Crazy Offer]


    Also am I within Forum rules if I get my WSO salespage critiqued?
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    • I think that you could probably bump it up to $27 (if thats what it is worth). Sorry I've never dealt in backlinks so I'm not sure what a good price is when I see one

      If I'm not mistaken, you can post a classifieds ad asking people to contact you to critique/review your WSO BEFORE you post the WSO. But I could be totally wrong.
      Frith,
      Kayla
  • The more reviews and feedback you get for the service the higher you could raise your price, in my opinion. If this is a brand new WSO, you may want to keep a lower price for the first few people so you can start generating reviews.

    But yes, I would still check it out at $27.00. That is still a good price for a SEO service.
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    • I like No 6.

      No hype, no shouting, no buzzwords - you're telling it like it is.

      Great to take out words like "insane", "crazy" and "amazing"

      They're used so often - now you can differentiate yourself from the mob.

      "Superior" says it all.

      I would be specific on the number - not 20,000 plus - maybe 20,079.

      Steve
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  • I like 5 the most but I also think 6 could be a good choice to use on WF.
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  • I think #5 is probably best.

    In answer to your question on pricing, $7 will pull more buyers in, and also get you more feedback and testimonials from happy customers.

    A strategy you could perhaps use is to find out the common WSO price for 3-5000 backlinks. If $7 is cheaper than most then have an $20 OTO upsell to 20,000 backlinks.

    Again, provided you are pricing below most other WSO's it should still be a no brainer.

    Good luck,
    Mark
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  • Hi,

    Thanks guys. Really appreciate it. I want to toss in a few more titles and see what you think:

    9) AMAZING -20,050 Quality Backlinks for $17 [NO xRumer, NO BS] - Legit $690 Value [Crazy Offer]

    10) POWERFUL BACKLINKS worth $690.. 20,050 Backlinks, Crazy prices [No xrumer, No BS]

    Do you think the above 2 are any better than the ones initially mentioned or does your preference still weigh towards 5 and 6?

    Thanks.
  • Personally — my eyes have grown dry of seeing headlines like 871283649269 backlinks for 1ยข + FREE PAGERANK 13 one-way dofollow lifetime links.

    ...there's nothing to separate a title like that from the 10,000 others like it. Remember the word contrast. Is it possible that you can create a headline that contrasts the the normal back link offers?

    "I'd Rather Crawl on My Naked Knees Across Broken Glass Before Paying For a Back Link Again..."

    "If Satan Sells 666 Back Links for $13 — Would I Be God if I Gave You..."

    ...or hell, something different for a clicking-change!
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    • You speak much sense...
      Oh, and OP, you should really give his views some thought.
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  • I like the third one!
    Good Luck Bro
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  • I would vote for the third one
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