First Attempt at Writing a Sales Page - Looking for Suggestions and Feeback
I am new to the internet marketing niche, and have spent some considerable time researching and learning as much as I possibly can about a small handful of important aspects.
An IM friend of mine with far more experience told me to start by learning how to write sales copy, since I'm a freelance writer already. He shared a few books of his with me, so I could learn more about how to do this.
After reading, I decided to take a stab at it...I haven't created the product yet (though I may end up doing that at some point). This was just to get some feedback on the overall effectiveness of what I wrote in order to pitch the idea.
Since I have published an eBook on Amazon, I decided the product would be a guide on how to market yourself as an independent author, since I've had some success with that...
I created a Squidoo lens for the sales page, I would love some feedback and general first impressions from anyone who has time to check it out: Make Money Self-Publishing
Thanks in advance for your help. I have read through the checklist for critiques, and will just say upfront that I haven't optimized a stellar headline yet, but was hoping to get some advice on what I have already written. I am still brainstorming on the best headline, in the mean time.
Also, I may have used a bit more bold text than is recommended in the checklist...but in m opinion, it helps improve the appearance of the text within the formatting limitations of Squidoo's lenses. If I'm way off on that point, feel free to challenge it and kindly inform me of my own stupidity. Again, I'm very new to all this...
Kind Regards,
Grain.