Long time no see - this involves a critique request. Fair warning.
My copywriting practice centers on life coaches and other "heart-centered" small business owners. I am in the process of building my website and wanted your evaluations of the effectiveness of my copy.
Please note that my references (within my website copy) to traditional copywriting is in no way a put-down to those who do that work. It is an attempt to agitate the frustration that life coaches feel in finding a wide divide between traditional copy and salesmanship and what they are comfortable with.
Copy is located here (if putting the link in is a problem, please advise and I will copy and paste).
There is a main page that leads into the page I am asking for critique on. There is a headline and subhead on that page, which is clickable and leads to the one you are being asked to evaluate. If you want to see that main headline and subhead, it is located here.
Keep in mind this is website copy as opposed to a squeeze page or a direct mailer. For that reason, I have not used a P.S. or certain other "techniques".
Thanks.
xResponsive Advertising Agency | Direct Marketing | Online Advertising | Create Breakthrough Campaigns for Your Business http://xresponsive.com
xResponsive Advertising Agency | Direct Marketing | Online Advertising | Create Breakthrough Campaigns for Your Business http://xresponsive.com
Site being revamped.
If you want help with copy stuff, pm me.
Cool.