Critique Request for WSO Post...Thanks
So sorry to trouble you. I noticed quite a few people were requesting critique for their sales page and I figured I'd add to the list.
My strength aren't really in copywriting or sales pages and I could really use some help in how to improve my SEO Service Sales page on the warrior forum.
I would very much appreciate if you could give me some feedback on how I can improved; I've tried to start with an attentiongetter followed by some reviews and then listing the service.
http://www.warriorforum.com/warriors...-reviewed.html
Initially I did it with one thread per service but I thought perhaps one thread for all service might have better chance of capturing a wider audience attention?
Please give me your feedback and if you need help with SEO just give me a shout...we're great in that field and I'd be happy to return with my own advice on SEO or some free link building campaigns.
THANKS..could really use the help here
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