Does my direct mail piece need revisions?
That said, any comments and the etc.. would be cool. I wrote this piece from scratch in about 45 minutes, and I think is not bad. I knew my market, so didn't seem so hard.
Rip it apart please : )
JD.
Hi, could you please forward this email to the appropriate person. Please note that this is not spam, and it is important we speak with the person(s) in charge in marketing.
If we could increase your bottom line profits by 30%, while also reducing your advertising costs by 50% by only adding a small tweak to your current website, would you be willing to have a chat with us?
Our names are Mitch, and Ryan representing Solkor International based out of Alberta, and we are helping businesses like yours bust through the recession, and rise above the competition using the Internet as a free source of new customers. If reducing your current advertising budget, and actually getting MORE customers at the same time interests you, then this may be the most important email you will ever read. We know competition is tough today, and we ourselves have gone through similar struggles recently...
How can we compete without going broke, let alone have money to grow?
Are there ways of advertising for free that can bring in new customers?
Can we use the power of the Internet to create a constant stream of new leads?
Could our website be turning away potential customers, and we don't even know it?
Little did we know where these questions would take us.
Due to our own struggles, and the resulting transformation, we are now able to offer your company some incredibly powerful, proven, and foolproof services such as:
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- Website reconstruction to update your style, and increase your credibility
- Advanced SEO (Which basically means we can get your site in front of more people. More people = more money)
- Expert writing, so that your visitors are more influenced to stay on your site and buy (or contact you), instead moving on to your competitor.
We are currently setting up appointments for the week of February 16 -27, and would like to know if you are interested in setting up a time to meet for further discussion. Since we are a small team of dedicated professionals, we only have a limited number of companies we can work with at a given time. If you are interested, we advise you contact us within the next 4 days to set up an appointment. Our meetings are short, and the main purpose is to see if we could be a good fit together. Please contact us by February 14th, by either:
Giving us a call at: (780) 499 9950 to schedule a time to meet.
Or
Reply to this email with the subject line: Request for free consultation
We thank you for reading this letter, and trust you see the value in taking advantage of some of the newest, and most exciting online marketing strategies for small businesses.
Looking forward to your interest,
Mitchell Miller
Ryan Demchuk c/o
Solkor International
Banff, AB
solkor.international@gmail.com
www.solkor.biz
P.S - Remember to contact us in the next 4 days to book your spot for the next batch of projects, and that none of this actually require that you have any computer knowledge whatsoever.
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