Should you be able to tell what my Web Site is about based on the Headline alone?

Hi guys-


I'm finally about to launch the product I've been developing for quite a long time. I initially posted this in the main forum and then realized it would probably make a ton more sense to post it here where a lot of the pros linger...



My question for my fellow warriors comes in the form of; Does my headline make sense? Do you know what I'm offering from just the text below?



You should be able to tell what a product is from the pre-header, header, first few lines of text., isn't that right?



...and one other question and I'll shut up. Would it make sense to put an image of earning proofs right underneath this text, or should I reserve that for later in the letter?


Thanks for any and all input, please be honest my feelings don't get hurt easily, well not that easily : )


tim


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