Should you be able to tell what my Web Site is about based on the Headline alone?

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Hi guys-


I'm finally about to launch the product I've been developing for quite a long time. I initially posted this in the main forum and then realized it would probably make a ton more sense to post it here where a lot of the pros linger...



My question for my fellow warriors comes in the form of; Does my headline make sense? Do you know what I'm offering from just the text below?



You should be able to tell what a product is from the pre-header, header, first few lines of text., isn't that right?



...and one other question and I'll shut up. Would it make sense to put an image of earning proofs right underneath this text, or should I reserve that for later in the letter?


Thanks for any and all input, please be honest my feelings don't get hurt easily, well not that easily : )


tim


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  • Profile picture of the author Gary Ning Lo
    Headlines are used to get attention..

    Yes it should be related to your product but the goal of the headline should be making the prospect continue reading the sales page...

    I would move earning proof to after description and benefits of the product..

    Got best results with this formula.

    Cheers,

    ~Gary
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    • Profile picture of the author MAVJ
      This guy gets it right, the headline should bring the reader in to the sales page and sum up what the whole offer relates to!

      MMO/Forex whatever..
      Basically collect the story up in to two sentences and make it hard hitting.

      Originally Posted by garytsang View Post

      Headlines are used to get attention..

      Yes it should be related to your product but the goal of the headline should be making the prospect continue reading the sales page...

      I would move earning proof to after description and benefits of the product..

      Got best results with this formula.

      Cheers,

      ~Gary
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  • Profile picture of the author HorseStall
    Absolutely! You only have a few seconds to capture the attention of the visitor, your headlines should do the job.
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  • Profile picture of the author TheeBook
    That's true! Headlines is very useful on guessing what is the niche of the site.
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  • Profile picture of the author tierney211
    Awesome info, thanks! So my next question would be...does the headline, pre-headline I have written above accomplish both of these goals?

    Do you have a clear idea of what I'm offering?

    Does it make the reader want to continue reading?
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    • Profile picture of the author YasirYar
      Originally Posted by tierney211 View Post

      Awesome info, thanks! So my next question would be...does the headline, pre-headline I have written above accomplish both of these goals?
      Do you have a clear idea of what I'm offering?
      Does it make the reader want to continue reading?
      What I make out of your headline is that you are selling a guide/blueprint for making money through Amazon if you are a kindle writer. Probably you will teach how to market a Kindle product.
      Frankly I get to see a hundred such products a day and everyone guarantees earning in 5 figures in just days, but there is always more to it than just what is offered. If you want to offer something better tell them that you will hold their hand while they make money. Not just a guide but you'll be a mentor all the way till they make it.
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      • Profile picture of the author tierney211
        Originally Posted by YasirYar View Post

        What I make out of your headline is that you are selling a guide/blueprint for making money through Amazon if you are a kindle writer. Probably you will teach how to market a Kindle product.
        Frankly I get to see a hundred such products a day and everyone guarantees earning in 5 figures in just days, but there is always more to it than just what is offered. If you want to offer something better tell them that you will hold their hand while they make money. Not just a guide but you'll be a mentor all the way till they make it.
        Good point, I like it. Thanks! I was thinking of adding a members only forum where I can be in contact with everyone on a regular basis, as there probably we be questions regardless of how detailed the course is. Good one.
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