Need help with landing page

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I was making a killing with facebook customized fan page so we decided to put up an actual landing page to launch an ad.

But facebook just had this big change with the timeline and we can't no longer sell our customized fan page. But we didn't let that stop us.

We've already got couple clients for the timeline design and I was wondering if you guys can help...

1. check out the landing page
2. see how I can improve it and change it more tailor to the timeline change.

http://philadelphiaseo.org/samples/F...ndingPage2.jpg

Thanks,
Chris
#copywriting #landing #page
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    • Thanks, I really appreciate your input. =)
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    Who wrote your main headline and positioned it way below the fold?
  • Some parts of the copy seem to have no connection with the product. You should consider what are the real needs of people who wants to buy a product to customize facebook fan pages.
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    Need help with landing page

    I was making a killing with facebook customized fan page so we decided to put up an actual landing page to launch an ad. But facebook just had this big change with the timeline and we can't no longer sell our customized fan page. But we didn't let that stop us.