I'm trying a different approach for the main salespage of my marketing company. I really think this will make my company stand out as the better option when compared to what other marketing companies in my area have to offer.
However, I could be wrong.
Please take a look at my letter and provide any constructive feedback you can think of for improvements, tweaks, etc.
Here's the page that I would appreciate feedback on:
Edmonton Marketing with Proven Profit-Increasing Strategies
I'm still in the process of setting up the other sections of the site, so there's nothing that really happens after opting in right now.
Currently my online info-product sales pages convert around 6%, I'm wondering if a similar style will work with getting business owners to just submit a request for more information...or is it overkill?
Are there any areas that seem confusing or too wordy? Any parts that I should expand more on?
I will be adding success stories using our strategies very shortly, along with some objection handling, I just want to make sure the flow seems to be on the right path.
The true test: Would YOU submit your information if you were a local business owner looking to increase your sales quickly and easily?
Thank you in advance for your feedback (as harsh as it may be, heh)