
Just made my 1st sale in March and would like to give a shoutout to a copywriter who...
His name is Ben Palmer Wilson.
Here are the before-and-after samples.
Note: There were some slight changes that I made, such as replacing "rubbish" (I'm not sure if Americans use this word...) and "pure gold" with other words and phrases, but besides that, everything else was pretty much written by him.
Before copy that took me hours to write: 2 | How To Focus Better
After copy that took him about 50 minutes to write: How To Focus Better
The end result with the 1st copy was about a month making 0 sales.
The end result of the 2nd copy was making a sale about 2 days after it was put up.
Anyway, I hope this helps someone out and just wanted to give...
A HUGE thank you!
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