Just made my 1st sale in March and would like to give a shoutout to a copywriter who...

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...did my copy for free!

His name is Ben Palmer Wilson.

Here are the before-and-after samples.

Note: There were some slight changes that I made, such as replacing "rubbish" (I'm not sure if Americans use this word...) and "pure gold" with other words and phrases, but besides that, everything else was pretty much written by him.

Before copy that took me hours to write: 2 | How To Focus Better

After copy that took him about 50 minutes to write: How To Focus Better

The end result with the 1st copy was about a month making 0 sales.

The end result of the 2nd copy was making a sale about 2 days after it was put up.

Anyway, I hope this helps someone out and just wanted to give...

A HUGE thank you!
#1st #copywriter #give #made #march #sale #shoutout
  • Hey, thanks man!


    Listen, I might end up sending you an updated piece of copy. Figure a 50 minute job can be improved upon massively!


    I'll be in touch!



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  • Profile picture of the author sklttles
    Where can I find his services?
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  • Profile picture of the author Mahara Adhe
    Woot! Gratz on the sales Keep.....and great job Ben! I can't wait to get my own sales flowing from your copy.
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  • Profile picture of the author Chris Cho
    Yea Ben got that KILLA COPY SKILLS! Wait for my testimonial soon... ddun ddun ddun it's COMING! =D
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    Congratulations, Ben! Unsolicited public praise is great. And you should be proud. - Rick Duris
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    • Originally Posted by sklttles View Post

      Where can I find his services?
      Originally Posted by DJ Opus View Post

      Any extra copywriter info would be great, paid or free, they need to be utilized.
      Hey guys,


      anything you need to ask me (Ben Palmer-Wilson), either PM me or get in touch via my email!


      benpalmerwilson@live.com


      Thanks Hulbert, means a lot to see this!




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  • Profile picture of the author MissLauraCatella
    Congrats Ben! So nice to have great clients who give you some love.
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  • Profile picture of the author Hayley McKeever
    That's fantastic! So nice to hear about the people who genuinely help each other.
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  • Profile picture of the author Mark Pescetti
    It's fantastic to see someone give, without wanting anything in return, then getting a big shout out like this.

    I don't believe in karma... (good or bad...)

    ...But I DO believe that the more you give, the more you get.

    Sure, it may not be from the same person.

    Nonetheless...

    The people who give the most are the ones who create the most financially abundant lives.
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