Writing for the market.. or the client...?

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I had a interesting ( ) conversation with a client the other day. He wanted a sales letter. I know his biz and product so I said sure and we decided to do 2 letters for him angled at different segments of the market he targets.

The product this client pushes is sort of a clone of a existing popular concept. Educating the buyer on the merits of his version is essential and proven to boost sales. Since his product is almost 5x more expensive than the competition the buyers are somewhat more savvy and demanding and providing factual information to them has been beneficial to sale stats on earlier tests.

But.. the client is so enamored with his own invention (and colorful packaging...) that he fails to see why anyone would not understand the fantastic benefits of buying his product more or less by simply looking at it. Based on this, he wants a more graphical style which lacks fundamental information since it should be common sense to understand how good it is :p

This is a client I know well and I ultimately got most of my angle on the letters, even though I had to cut and trim and bend and twist to incorporate unwanted parts to satisfy the client... who in the end is paying for it. Had I not known this client personally and lacked the leverage of friendship, I may have been inclined to accept more of the client's wishes even though it may have impacted on the quality of the letter. Or walked away from the assignment perhaps. :rolleyes:

The balance between doing a good job, building rep, getting more jobs, etc. is not a exact science - but as with everything in marketing (as I see it) - it is heavily dependent on psychology and understanding the emotional needs of your counterpart.

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Anyway, I would like to hear your experiences on projects where you had to balance between being creative towards the market (as in creating a letter maxed for conversion) and giving the client what they want (often with less results).
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  • Profile picture of the author daveshu
    Why don't you suggest split testing his idea against yours.
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  • Profile picture of the author Raydal
    Right in my recruiting sales letter for my services I let
    the client know that I'm the expert in copywriting
    even though he may be the expert in his product.

    This doesn't mean that you ignore the client's wishes
    but if he already knows how to sell why come to me?

    I find when you have this struggle with potential clients
    it's for one main reason: they are not really sold on using
    your service or your expertise.

    If I find that a client lacks confidence in what I can
    provide then I politely let him know he can find
    another copywriter to work with.

    It's definitely a team effort, but somebody has to lead
    in the selling aspect and I think that's why you came
    to me.

    I know some copywriters will give the client what he wants and
    just take the money, but I can't in good conscience do that.
    Plus, the working relationship will be strained and very
    stressful to work under.

    Some clients would "let you win" the argument and then
    simply take your copy and "fix it" to their views.

    -Ray Edwards
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  • Profile picture of the author thereikid
    Great story. I agree its more of an art than a science. The best way I believe is to be present to the situation and be attached from the result and see what happens then adjust accordingly.
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  • Profile picture of the author copyassassin
    Originally Posted by mrdomains View Post


    Anyway, I would like to hear your experiences on projects where you had to balance between being creative towards the market (as in creating a letter maxed for conversion) and giving the client what they want (often with less results).
    This works 99.99% of the time:

    Make a bet.

    Tell him you'll do it his way, and your way. Winner take all.

    If he wins, you refund the fee.

    If you win, you double your fee.

    Measurement ends all debate.
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  • Profile picture of the author Mark Pescetti
    I tell my clients right off the bat that my job isn't to appease them, but appeal to their audience. I'm fortunate that most of the time, these two very different aspects mesh.

    That being said...

    Copywriters must be able to communicate their visions for the copy - so the client can get on board.

    Mark Pescetti
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    • Profile picture of the author mrdomains
      Originally Posted by Reflection Marketing View Post


      Copywriters must be able to communicate their visions for the copy..

      Mark Pescetti
      Excellent
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