How's the copy on this squeeze page?
I put up a squeeze page to capture names/emails so when the product is ready to launch, I have a list of people already waiting. ok, basic stuff right..
So, here is what I have. I normally would make the opt-in box above the fold but I felt like this needed to be sold to actually build a motivated list as opposed to someone just trying to get the free ebook (my last info product I created, and still sell to this day) I am also offering.
Anyways, can I get some honest opinions on the copy here...
http://www.MomAndPopMoney.com
Thanks guys! I readily admit that copy isn't my strong suit but I've read a ton on the subject (Joe Vitale, Dan Kennedy, Robert Collier, etc.) so I really do try to write "moving" copy LOL.. That said, please be totally honest.. my feelings won't be (that) hurt
Thanks again!
Peter
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