How Can I Make This Better?
I released my very 1st WSO yesterday and have had a pretty good response.
Until a few days ago, I have only written 2 sales pages, and seem to be getting better.
However, I know I should have consulted with a copywriter prior to going live.
I was wondering if a few of you can briefly review my Sales Page and let me know some key ways I can make this better?
Don't be afraid to touch on some very important points.
From top to bottom Is there anything I need to add, emphasize on, or completely take away in order to get a better response? Pretend like this was your product, what are the things you would do?
Your input is very important.
Here is the sales letter Click Here
Please let me know your thoughts
Thanks In Advance
Andrew Gould
- Jack Trout
Andrew Gould
Site being revamped.
If you want help with copy stuff, pm me.
Cool.
Site being revamped.
If you want help with copy stuff, pm me.
Cool.
Signed, Chloe C Kimberley
copywriter,designer,marketer
"If you're making good money with SEO/PPC/product creation, I'll be willing to offer copywriting assistance to you so that I can learn from you."