Sales Letter Review - Be Gentle, it's my first time.
I'm hoping someone who is experience with sales letter would be able to take a look at my first attempt.
The page is optionstradingiqcourse (dot) com
I tried to follow this method that I found in another post in this forum. I'm missing the scarcity, but will offer free coaching to the first X number of people to sign up when I do a live webinar. Maybe just missing a call to action and a warning?
Any advice would be greatly appreciated. thank you in advance.
1. Call out to your audience
2. Get their attention
3. Backup the big promise headline with a quick explanation (Sub)
4. Identify the problem
5. Provide the solution
6. Show pain of and cost of development
7. Explain ease-of-use
8. Show speed to results
9. Future cast
10. Show your credentials
11. Detail the benefits
12. Get social proof
13. Make your offer
14. Add bonuses
15. Build up your value
16. Reveal your price (pop by button)
17. Inject scarcity (if any)
18. Give guarantee
19. Call to action
20. Give a warning
21. Close with a reminder
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