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Really solid copy - found via facebook ppc. Very impressed.

by ASCW
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I thought this landing page was very impressive - and the whole process smooth and streamlined.

Creative Text Headline

ATTN: Email Marketers!
5daysalesmachine.com

Body Copy:
Load this proven email promotion into your auto-responder and skyrocket your sales this week. We did $8,260 in 5 days. (Here's proof...

Landing page:
5DaySalesMachine.com

Happy Conversions

-Andy
#copy #facebook #found #impressed #ppc #solid
  • Profile picture of the author arfasaira
    Thanks for the share Andy, the copy was pretty solid and I bought it

    let's see how it works on my own conversions!
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    • Profile picture of the author NickN
      Even though it's pretty much a text video, I like the production values.

      What program does this video use? It seems too sophisticated for PowerPoint. (I'm not a techie, so I don't know much about these programs.)

      I also like the line, "I need to weed out some people." Direct, to-the-point way to get attention and filter prospects.
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      • Profile picture of the author Sean Fry
        Originally Posted by NickN View Post

        Even though it's pretty much a text video, I like the production values.

        What program does this video use? It seems too sophisticated for PowerPoint. (I'm not a techie, so I don't know much about these programs.)
        Keynote for mac for the majority of it, not sure what they used for that opening graphic sequence though.

        The scripting/storytelling used in the video is what Andy Jenkins teaches in video boss.
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  • Profile picture of the author davemiz
    he just automated kerns 4 day cash machine.

    saw the video a while back, was pretty good...
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  • Profile picture of the author The Copy Nazi
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    "Very impressed". Uh huh. Current Gravity on Clickbank? 1.11
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    • Profile picture of the author markpocock
      The video took 17 seconds before you hear anything.
      Waaaaay too long.

      Does he really think people are going to hang around that long
      for him?

      Big Mistake.
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      • Profile picture of the author The Copy Nazi
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        Originally Posted by markpocock View Post

        The video took 17 seconds before you hear anything.
        Waaaaay too long.

        Does he really think people are going to hang around that long
        for him?

        Big Mistake.
        Took exactly 5 seconds to load on my connection.
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      • Profile picture of the author ASCW
        Originally Posted by markpocock View Post

        The video took 17 seconds before you hear anything.
        Waaaaay too long.

        Does he really think people are going to hang around that long
        for him?

        Big Mistake.
        What do you recommend as a best length for opening pattern breaks?

        Please, Dave, Mal, chime in.

        Took exactly 5 seconds to load on my connection.
        Yikes, that's no good.
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  • Profile picture of the author davemiz
    Mal... don't judge an offer by CB gravity.... mine is super low, but i run most of my own traffic.... even when i've done big volume, like 6 figures in a week, with a bunch of affiliates its been relatively low.
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  • Profile picture of the author davemiz
    i am totally non qualified to answer that.... no idea.

    sometimes people do it to let the video load without the audio coming up first.... thats my best guess.
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  • Profile picture of the author markpocock
    The guy should be telling me in the first 5 seconds why I should
    watch his video. And not keep me hanging around. As his video is
    now, it's like running an ad in a newspaper with a confusing headline
    and expecting the reader to spend time figuring it out. Not going to
    happen.

    Having written the above... if the video is going to just his own list,
    and his list regard him as The Man, than I guess they could hang around.
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