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Traffic system sales page

by Wytnyt
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Hi guys,

I just stumbled on this sales page a couple of days ago. The video and the graphics look really well-done, the copy looks okay for me as well.

My only beef with it is that half of the whole copy is kinda dedicated to talking about how much of an influence he is.

What do you guys think?

Here's the page.

Quick Sprout Traffic System – SEO and Online Marketing Training

P.S. - I didn't do this copy, nor am I in any way connected to Neil Patel. I just stumbled on this and want to know other copywriters' thoughts on it.
#page #sales #system #traffic
  • Profile picture of the author erichammer
    A little wordy for my taste, but I like the fact that he doesn't go in for the insane hype that seems to be the staple of every wannabe marketer online these days. He seems to know what he's doing and is simply telling you that he knows what he's doing. That said, I think cutting down the paragraphs and making them a bit easier to read could be helpful.

    BTW, on a personal note, I didn't know he offered that, but I am very tempted to buy it myself. Mostly because the one "guru" I actually listen to all the time has a module in his training -- John Chow.

    Eric
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  • Profile picture of the author markpocock
    Great headline. In fact the headline is very similar to the
    Conversion Rate Experts headline on their web page:

    Watch this video to find out why the likes of Apple, Sony and Google
    turn to us when they need help increasing their website conversions
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    • Profile picture of the author Steve The Copywriter
      Yes a great headline - it oozes credibility.

      But I hate "continuity payments" that are slightly hidden way down at the foot of the page.

      Is anyone ever thrilled when they see them?

      No.

      It demolishes the desire that was created - and just pisses you off.

      There's always a way to be upfront about them - and then do the "try before you buy" at an introductory price.

      Just my thoughts,

      Steve
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