Senator Rand Paul's Copywriter

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I got an email petition advertisment from Senator Rand Paul of Kentucky.

The lead for his letter?

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"Dear Concerned American,

They snickered when I said I came to the U.S. Senate to change Congress.

But their laughter stopped when I sponsored the National Right to Work Act...[etc.]"
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Classic. Literally.
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  • LOL!

    They snickered?

    probably thinking of chocolate when he wrote it!

    Although I'm surprised no one picked up on that!





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    • Yeah it's kind of lame actually. It's basically a failed attempt at a cliche. Cliches are bad, bungled cliches are cringeworthy.
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  • Not that I'm one to defend Rand Paul, but...

    Snicker - Definition and More from the Free Merriam-Webster Dictionary

    snicker -- "to laugh in a covert or partly suppressed manner"
  • Ineffective swiping no doubt.

    They laughed when I told them I was going to change congress...
    But when they found out what I did their jaws dropped in amazement

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