Opinions wanted, please
Learning copy-writing is not that easy. Here a new try. Could you please gave me your suggestions on...
+ the headline: should it be more specific on the service offered?
+ the supporting paragraph, which I consider the second one
+ the bullets at the end.
Thanking the masters,
Tedel
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DavidG -
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Tedel -
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jgrink -
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