Under-Hyping To Win More Sales

by Raydal
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There's a saying in my country that goes something like this: "A
fisherman never says his fish is bad!" But should he if he wants to
make more sales?

"Hype" has become a word that many online marketers
are shying away from.

Yet each person has his or her own definition of what constitutes
hype. I just typed in the word "hype" at Answers.com and here are
two definitions the dictionary returned:

1. Exaggerated or extravagant claims made especially in advertising or
promotional material: "It is pure hype, a gigantic PR job"

2. Something deliberately misleading; a deception: "[He] says that
there isn't any energy crisis at all, that it's all a hype, to
maintain outrageous profits for the oil companies"


Even from those two definitions we see that one indicates exaggeration
which makes up the figure of speech called a hyperbole and the other
suggests deliberate deception.

I think most marketers will want to shy away from deceiving their
prospects. From that perspective 'hype' will not just be wrong but
unethical.

But what most people see as 'hype' normally involves a high-pressure
direct selling sales letter that uses many superlatives and promises
much more than the product or service can deliver. For example, to
make the purchaser rich overnight with little effort on their part and
instant success and gratification.

This style of writing has become so popular on the internet that most
people have become immune to such letters. The kind of sales copy that
now stands out is the one that is more down-to-earth and shows a human
side. By 'human side' I mean openly admitting to the downside or
faults of your wares.


This of course is a counter intuitive approach. Who wants to admit that
they are selling 'faulty' products? In fact, the real purpose of a
sales letter is to get a sale not to drive people away. So, if logic
and common sense hold true, you should show all the great benefits
that your product or service offers. And be silent about the
weaknesses.

But a big issue, especially on the internet, is a matter of credibility.
And when you are willing to say that your product or service is not
the perfect solution then your credibility just shoots through the
roof! You become believable and transparent and it shows that you have
nothing to hide.

In other words, it's when you are weak that you are strong. Those
words are taken from the Bible story about Paul who prayed to God to
take away his "thorn in the flesh". His request wasn't granted but
instead he was told that he is stronger when he is weaker. You see
Paul was such a "perfect" Christian that he needed something to
remind him that he was still human.

There is something interesting I realize about the American public.
They are willing to forgive you of the most serous blunders whether
public or private ... if you admit to them. But if you are found out
while trying to hide these 'imperfections' then the public and media
will rip you apart.

The same will happen in your marketing as well. If you admit to the
weaknesses of your products then you WILL make more sales. Let us look
at some ways in which you can do this:

A. This one is obvious but you should still say that your product is
not for everyone and then define your market. This works to build
exclusivity for your product and at the same time show that you are
not trying to sell to the entire world.

B. Admit that there may be better products than yours but they are
more expensive. You can then show that yours will be a bargain for the
price.

C. Instead of pretending to be a "guru", state that you are just
starting out and that's why you are so reasonable in your fees. (If
this is the case.)

D. Be honest about the 'average results' that your product brings to
your customer. It's customary to show your best results in the
testimonials you use with that disclaimer tucked in fine print at the
end: 'these results are not typical'. Since the law requires this why
not just be upfront about it.

E. Always under-promise and over-deliver! This will be appreciated by
your prospects every time.

There is a period just after placing an order when your customers go
through a moment of regret and psychological dissonance. "Was I
foolish to make this purchase? Did I pay a fair price? I wonder if
this will really work?"

That's why you should always follow up a sale with a note of thanks
for the purchase. This will help to reassure the new customer during
this critical period.

But if you promise more than you could deliver then this period of
regret will lead into a request for a refund or even worse--a lost
customer for life. On the other hand, if you deliver more than you
promised then the customers feel smart about their decision and for
'discovering' you. You'll have a customer for life!

So even if your "fish" is perfect maybe you should sell your
customers on your catch being just 'great' and allow the customers to
discover your fish is really perfect.

You'll catch more customers in the process ... and maybe more fish
too!

-Ray Edwards
#sales #underhyping #win
  • Profile picture of the author clonedrone
    Great stuff...

    I would also add

    Instead of saying your a guru.....Show them your a guru.

    Pull them to you, don't push you, to them
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  • Profile picture of the author Lifeimprovement
    Under delivering will cost a lot in loss of back sales.
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  • Profile picture of the author stephenh
    I have posted this elsewhere but I really think that evryone here could benefit from reading Dan Kennedy's book on No BS Business Success where he teaches about positioning yourself.

    Then you don't have to sell anything

    Stephen
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    • Profile picture of the author Raydal
      Originally Posted by stephenh View Post

      I have posted this elsewhere but I really think that evryone here could benefit from reading Dan Kennedy's book on No BS Business Success where he teaches about positioning yourself.

      Then you don't have to sell anything

      Stephen
      Yes, that's chapter 4 in his book, but the irony is that you have to
      SELL yourself into the position where you don't need to "sell" anymore.

      Everybody has to sell, there's no getting away from this, the question
      is "how direct?"

      -Ray Edwards
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  • Profile picture of the author snyd
    Hi Ray,

    Great post, and solid info.

    Understanding what Paul was saying when he said "My strength is made perfect in weakness" is so important to a successful life.

    Who is our strength..


    Thanks
    Rod
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    • Profile picture of the author Raydal
      Originally Posted by snyd View Post

      Hi Ray,

      Great post, and solid info.

      Understanding what Paul was saying when he said "My strength is made perfect in weakness" is so important to a successful life.

      Who is our strength..


      Thanks
      Rod
      The American public for sure loves when their leaders admit to
      wrongdoing but will crucify you if you try to hide and then
      are later found out.

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  • Profile picture of the author DavidO
    It's obvious that just about everyone agrees with you on this... but how many will actually put it into practice?

    Try it. I can personally confirm that this approach is effective. My conversions for a health product increased when I began including things like "Nothing is 100% effective..." and "this is no miracle cure".

    I've not yet included a less than overwhelmingly positive testimonial but it think this is the next step. Showing that you're not afraid to show negative or luke-warm experiences sets you apart and builds credibility.

    Thanks for a truly constructive post!
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    • Profile picture of the author Raydal
      Originally Posted by DavidO View Post

      It's obvious that just about everyone agrees with you on this... but how many will actually put it into practice?

      Try it. I can personally confirm that this approach is effective. My conversions for a health product increased when I began including things like "Nothing is 100% effective..." and "this is no miracle cure".

      I've not yet included a less than overwhelmingly positive testimonial but it think this is the next step. Showing that you're not afraid to show negative or luke-warm experiences sets you apart and builds credibility.

      Thanks for a truly constructive post!
      Hi David,

      Let me give you a million-dollar 'secret'. And BTW, this what separates
      the sheep from the goats in copywriting (because a copywriter has to
      be a marketer!).

      Do you know WHY this worked so well in your market? Because the
      weight-loss and health market in general is swamped with huge
      benefit copy and headlines. People have become immune to that
      type of copy--the big promises and small delivery.

      So when you admit to the "weakness" of your product, you stand
      out from the crowd. Everybody else is shouting and you are
      whispering so you get heard!

      The bottom line is that if your market is saturated with people
      making huge claims make a smaller, more modest claim and you'll
      win the day.

      (I almost feel like I should be paid for advice like this.)

      -Ray Edwards
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      • Profile picture of the author Joseph Ratliff
        Originally Posted by Raydal View Post

        Hi David,

        Let me give you a million-dollar 'secret'. And BTW, this what separates
        the sheep from the goats in copywriting (because a copywriter has to
        be a marketer!).

        Do you know WHY this worked so well in your market? Because the
        weight-loss and health market in general is swamped with huge
        benefit copy and headlines. People have become immune to that
        type of copy--the big promises and small delivery.

        So when you admit to the "weakness" of your product, you stand
        out from the crowd. Everybody else is shouting and you are
        whispering so you get heard!

        The bottom line is that if your market is saturated with people
        making huge claims make a smaller, more modest claim and you'll
        win the day.

        (I almost feel like I should be paid for advice like this.)

        -Ray Edwards
        Good stuff Ray...and it's VERY true of the H & W market...in most niches within that market...lots of hype ads have "numbed" that market to typical approaches.
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      • Profile picture of the author WFStarter
        Originally Posted by Raydal View Post

        Hi David,

        Let me give you a million-dollar 'secret'. And BTW, this what separates
        the sheep from the goats in copywriting (because a copywriter has to
        be a marketer!).

        Do you know WHY this worked so well in your market? Because the
        weight-loss and health market in general is swamped with huge
        benefit copy and headlines. People have become immune to that
        type of copy--the big promises and small delivery.

        So when you admit to the "weakness" of your product, you stand
        out from the crowd. Everybody else is shouting and you are
        whispering so you get heard!

        The bottom line is that if your market is saturated with people
        making huge claims make a smaller, more modest claim and you'll
        win the day.

        (I almost feel like I should be paid for advice like this.)

        -Ray Edwards

        Very true.

        Even so for money-making market that hypes everything up to the outer space. Instead of saying making 1.56 gazillion dollars a day, more believable are "with hard work, you will be able to earn $100-$150 a day." and buyers will jump on that.
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  • Profile picture of the author wrcato
    Great and true message Ray. I can't think of anything to add... oh ya, "Give and it shall be given to you.

    Paul was such a "perfect" Christian that he needed something to
    remind him that he was still human.
    In Romans Paul said, he was the chief of all 'sinners', so how could he be a perfect Christian?
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  • Profile picture of the author metafever
    I think your right . . proof is always in the pudding.

    Anyone can stand up and say they are the greatest, but I want to see screen shots and videos (even then I am skeptical).
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  • Profile picture of the author vistad
    The opening message is great. There is much hype on the Internet that people whether they receive e-mails or visit sites are not just becoming immune to it, but getting turned off by it.
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