Please Critique my First Attempt at Online Long-form Sales Copy
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I don't claim to be a copywriter, but I've read a ton of books and re-written (word-for-word) a bunch of sales copy. I hope that something has sunk in, and that what I've written can serve as a foundation for an improving sales page.
Thanks again for your time.
Regards,
Joel
Cheers,
Winston
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